Continuing the discussion from Process for consent decisions on the forum:
Here’s a list of changes that I would like to make to the text; feel free to discuss them or propose other changes, as long as the others are likely going to support them.
Replace with “A team member”.
Replace with “All forum users may participate”.
Replace with “Results: Always”. AFAICT even with “Results: Always”, you need to vote before you see the results. The only difference is that you can click on “See results” if you really want to see the results without/before voting.
Replace with “One week later, the secretary will start”.
Replace with “they will propose the next review date”.
Replace with “If you can convince them while the poll is still open, they can still change their vote. If they’re convinced”. (Note that the quotes around “vote” are removed in addition to the gender-neutral language.)